Editing
The script is basically perfect - and by way of editing there isn't much i will have to edit or change. Content wise - the script if pretty family/school friendly but still dealing with Adult issues and concerns and not to mention humour.
The main edits i want to make/are making is the small contextual references in the jokes to make it more funny. i have changed the hungry jacks references to McDonalds and the Nivea for men to lynx. the audience i am performing this too will have a much better understanding and relate-ablilty based on this change. |